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Thursday, March 15, 2012

*Excerpt* Untitled

I started this blog to share my work as a friend suggested I do before publishing.  And I have done everything BUT that *shrug* until now....

Having completed the massage he laid next to her and she began to strum her fingers across his tekken causing it to jump with anticipation.  She guided his hand across her breast down her stomach to her waist beads “You can touch them.”  His pupils widened with surprise and excitement as he ran his hand across them.  Instantly he felt a surge of energy, emotion, awareness, heat and cold flash over him and she was able to feel his divinity.  At that point the blending began her juice drenched her legs and the bed as his hardness grew greater.  There was a slight fear in the air on both of their parts; it wasn’t enough to stop the train of energy that had been set into motion.  His tongue met and parted hers to reveal a warm sweetness that was intoxicating.  It felt as if the room was spinning and her only stability was his touch.  As he delved deeper into her he lost all time, space and reason.  The world around them shifted and faded in and out of existence.  They could barely feel each others touch only the waves, surges, pulses and rushes of arousal that streamed freely.  At the point of insertion their pleasure ascended to a new height and they pulled each other closer as if trying to unite, combine, blend, meld and merge.  His in and outs were causing her to come undone.  It was impossible for either of them to focus on or lessen the effect of the other.  As their bodies suspended above the bed they switched position like hieroglyphs telling the story of the stars being created.  His pressing deeper her holding tighter, drops of sweat fell upwards hit the ceiling as they lowered to the bed.  Her legs wrapped around his waist tightly as he lifted her off the bed and set her on the dresser and continued exploring.  As the candles hit the floor the crystal stick clinked, the wick extinguished, wax spilled and darkness feel upon the room. “Tell me what you see.” Fell from her lips.  He opened his eyes and stared into her face which was blurry at first then seemed to disappear.   “Can you see me, do know who I am?”  She grabbed the back of his neck as he continued pushing, thrusting, sliding and expanding inside of her....

7 comments:

graymatta said...

My goodness...this is good....yeah...I'm getting married this year...and yes, this WILL HAPPEN..

Anonymous said...

Wow! Your amazing with your words. You painted that picture so vividly. I really like this. Cant wait for more. -JayLuvve

A. Jarrell Hayes said...

I enjoy your imagery and vocabulary. This is a hot excerpt.

B. Sharise Moore said...

Steamy!!! Yes! I want to know more about the characters, who they are, how they feel about one another and the world in which they live. Great excerpt. It peaks the interest and whets the sexual appetite ;-) Very well done sis! Looking forward to reading the novel this summer!

c. jay conrod said...

I think what I loved most was how clear it was without being trashy. It's a real art to tread that line. I want to read more.

coreman2200 said...

You truly have a beautiful way of orchestrating a scene.. As if it were perfumed into being, sparkling with the essence of every touch and taste and whisper.. Already a great fan of your writing, it just amazes me each time just how you draw the reader with the flavor of your mood and tone.. Delicious ;)

Milele said...

Okay so I am SUPERRRR late with this. I don't know how I missed all these post. Thank you all for taking the time to read this post and respond and for your continued support. I hope you all have enjoyed the book.
Much love to each of you