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Thursday, June 7, 2012

Excerpt 1 of 3 from "The stranger" June 7th 2012

....So what do you say? Without hesitation, I said, Yes. As I followed this stranger to his house mindlessly, I felt like I was in a trance. I could see the raindrops hitting the windows and sliding down the glass; as if to surrender. When we arrived I continued straight into his house and sat down on the couch. He was a perfect host. After offering me some dry clothes he told me to lay back and relax while he prepared something to eat. What is your favorite fruit? His words ricocheted off the walls like the sweetest apologies. They sent me soaring through my mind, time and space. I replayed our chance meeting in my mind: his words, scent, touch. Visions of the threesomes I repeatedly watched flashed in my mind and I grew aroused. His words coaxed me back to reality. You did not answer me so I brought you some of everything. He motioned to a tray of grapes, berries, melons, oranges, pomegranate, guava, mango, bananas, pears, peaches and several other fruits....

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I love this excerpt...maybe it is because I'm a fruit lover and I like a good tease but the way the story begins with a stranger is perfect for drawing me in...I have always had a fascination with attractive strangers...throw in some fruit and I'm sold...